2022年高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)：讀后續(xù)寫寫作技巧提升講解精編詳細版技巧一：動作描寫：心中有“畫”，筆下有“話”(畫面感)通過分解動作使之更具有畫面感①Hethankedtheman,tookoverthereinsandledtheponyinmydirection.②Seeingthis,Mr.Rowecameuptohim,croucheddownandaskedinatoneoftendersolicitude,“What’sup?”③Withapangofnervousnessseizinghishearttightly,hestoodinfrontofthedoor,wonderingabouttheoldman’sreactiontobeingdisturbedasecondtime.Finally,hesummonedupallhiscourageandknockedatthedoor.情景1：碰到難題，苦思冥想。Whatacomplicatedanddifficultmathproblem!Onesecond,LittleJohnrestedhischininhishandandfiddledwiththepencil.Thenext,hefidgetedinhisseatandscratchedhisheadoverandoveragain,nothavingthefaintestideahowtoworkitout.情景2：成功爬上山頂。Themagnificentlandscapeunfoldinginfrontofme,asenseofrefreshmentspreadthroughme.Involuntarily,Istretchedoutmyarms,tiltedmyheadandexclaimedindelightatthetopofmyvoice,feelingthecrispbreezeonmyface.鑒賞案例1：請根據(jù)所給句子內(nèi)容，結(jié)合原文，續(xù)寫后面的句子。句子①：Suddenly,aboyranaroundthecornerandcrashedintomebeforeIcouldjumpedoutoftheway.[習(xí)作展示和賞析]學(xué)生句子1:Asresult,wefelldownandthegiftboxdroppedtotheground.學(xué)生句子2:Wefellhardtotheground,andmygiftboxflewfrommyhandsandlandedonthestreetwithathump.【點評】句子1只停留在發(fā)生了什么，屬于敘述。而句子2我們重重的摔在地上，禮物隨之飛出去砰的一聲落在地上，則是通過fell,flewfrom,landedon這三個動作來描寫杯子掉落的場景。這個句子不僅講述了事件發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，還給句子加上了聲音“withthump”!要使一個平淡的敘述句子轉(zhuǎn)換成一個生動形象的描寫句子可以通過分解動作或給句子加上聲音，來使描寫更具有畫面感。添加符合情境的細節(jié)描寫使之更具有畫面感。在人物動作描寫之外添加其心理、神態(tài)等，有時也可以輔以適當(dāng)?shù)沫h(huán)境描寫。給動作“涂脂抹粉”①Withhisheaddrooping,Johnreluctantlyturnedaround,andslowlyinchedhiswaytohisroom.②Inasobbingvoice,headmittedandregrettedhavingcheatedinthetest.③Withoutamomentaryhesitation,IelbowedmywaythroughthecrowdinthedirectionofLegosectionandallthewaykeptcallingmybrother’sname,anoteofuneasinessinmyvoice.第21頁共21頁,情景3：發(fā)現(xiàn)一只受傷的小鳥。Onthegrassaheadlayaswallowwithanoutstretchedwingthatwasobviouslybroken.Seeingthis,LittleBettywalkedswiftlybesidethepoorlittlecreature,stoopeddown,andlifteditinhercuppedhandsgentlyandcarefullyasifholdingapreciousandfragiletreasure.給動作“配上聲音”給動作“加上表情”Takingadeepbreath,hesummonedupallhisremainingcourageandgentlyknockedatthedoor.Withaflickerofangerinhiseyes,theoldmanopenedthedoorandsnappedinacoldvoice,“Whycomeagain?!”Timidly,theboystretchedouthishandsandstuffedhisdogfigurineintotheoldman’spalm.“Forme?”askedtheman,confusionregisteringonhisface.Theboynodded,“Ihopeyou’lllikeit.”Eyeslingeringonthefigurine,theman’sfacesoftened,and,muchtotheboy’sastonishment,itcreasedintoafaintsmile.“Thankyou,”utteredtheoldman,hiseyesred-rimmedwithtears.情景4：久別之后回到家。Thefamiliarsightcameintoview. Involuntarily,heclutchedthehandleoftheluggagemorefirmlyandquickenedhispacetowardshishome,hisminddriftingtothesurprisedanddelightedexpressiononhismother’sface. Reachingthedoorstep,hepausedtocomposehimself,pushedopenthedoorandexclaimedindelight,“Mum,I’mhome,”withhiseyessparklingwithanticipation.給動作“融入心理”①ButI,consumedwithintenseangerathersuddenappearanceinmydoorway,justcastheranindifferentglance,ignoredherpleadinglookandutterednoword.②TornbetweentheoverwhelmingyearningforthedelicatebootsandthemelancholyforourdepressingChristmas,Icametoahalthalfwaytotheshoestore.情景5：憧憬假期。Withhischininhiscuppedhand,hesattheremotionlessly,allhismindonwheretospendthelong-anticipatedholiday.Actually,allthesedayshehadbeenrackinghisbrainstofigureoutaplan. Thenallofasudden,hehadanidea—howaboutgoingtothebeachforrelaxation? “Yes,that’sit!”hewhisperedtohimself,hislipscurvingintoabeamingsmile.給動作“添上環(huán)境”①Anxiouslystrainingmyeyes,Iscannedthetoystore,buthewasnowheretobefound.Outside,thunderandlightningcontinued;inside,chaoticnoiseranginmyears.Deepanxietydominatingme,Iwasonthevergeoftearsandstoodrootedinblackness,hopelessandhelpless.②Worsestill,whenthefiredieddown,thewholewildernesswasenvelopedinpitchdarkness,withnooneinsight.Whatkeptuscompanywasthechillwindthatruthlesslywhippedmyface,graduallydevouringthelastbitoftheremaininghopeinmyheart.情景6：得知被心儀的大學(xué)錄取。TheAdmissionLetterclutchedtightlyinmyhand,Ijumpedupanddownwithundisguisedexcitement.Tired,Ilaydownonthegrassandhummedmylittletunealongwiththebirds’twittering.Thebreeze,thoughabitcool,blewintomyheart,dispellingtheanxietythathadhauntedmeforalongtime.第21頁共21頁,鑒賞案例2：請比較以下兩句話，哪句話更符合例1中的情境。1:Whenwegottotheapartment,weploppeddownonchairs.Theairfeltwarmer,andtheroomseemedbrighter.2:Whenwegottotheapartment,weploppeddownonchairs.Theairfroze,andtheroomseemeddarkerthanitsupposedtobeatdusk.【解析】句2更符合。解析：回到家后，我和Aide生氣的坐在椅子上。此刻，我們的心情應(yīng)該是沉重的。仔細閱讀句子1、2,不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，句子2更符合當(dāng)時的情景。我們倆因為心愛的禮物被撞碎了，又傷心又難過。此時空氣猶如凝固了一般，整個家看起來比往日顯得更加沉悶了?？梢?，添加符合情境的環(huán)境描寫能使描寫更具畫面感。寫作案例3：請用描寫的方式將下句話中的省略部分補充完整。"Itisn'tfair!Whydidthathappen？"Aidencried.Hislowerliptrembled…____________________________________________________________________參考答案："Itisn'tfair!Whydidthathappen?"Aidencried.Hislowerliptrembled,hiseyeswerefilledwithtearsandhishandsshook.【解析】Aiden哭了，后面一串省略號可以添加符合情境的人物細節(jié)描寫來凸顯一個哭泣、傷心的人。比如說他的下嘴唇顫抖著，他的眼里充滿淚水，他的雙手顫抖，他的心如死水等，從而構(gòu)建了一個立體的畫面感。技巧二：關(guān)注詞的質(zhì)感，錘煉句子和段落關(guān)注詞的質(zhì)感即準(zhǔn)確理解詞的含義，掌握近義詞的區(qū)別，理解詞的上下義關(guān)系等，從而選取最合適、最準(zhǔn)確的詞，從而達到細膩描寫的效果。以下分別通過句和段落來說明如何關(guān)注詞的質(zhì)感。鑒賞案例5：比較下列兩句話，思考哪句話更好，并說明理由。1.Wefellhardtotheground,andmygiftboxflewfrommyhandsandlandedonthestreetwithathump.2.Wefellhardtotheground,andmygiftboxfellfrommyhandsanddroppedonthestreet.【解析】句子1更好。比較1、2句子，句1中flewfrommyhands(飛了出去),夸張的手法使用說明禮物盒落地的速度；landedonthestreetwiththump(砰的一聲落到了地上)，暗示禮物盒會嚴重受損。句1中flewfrom,landedon....withthump兩個質(zhì)感詞的使用讓續(xù)寫畫面躍然紙上。技巧三：句型多樣：長短結(jié)合，簡繁交錯①Whatanadorablepony!Itsslenderbody,itssilkymane,itsleisurelypace,anditsshinysaddle,allkeptmesospellboundthatIcouldn’tavertmygazefromit.(感嘆句；名詞短語；so...that句型)②Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,thelongingforbootsfinallygavewaytothedesiretobuyaturkey.(名詞性從句)③Sceneafterscene,whereMumworkeddayinanddayoutandthewholefamilystruggledtomakeendsmeet,camefloodinginmymind.(定語從句)④Outofthedarkforestcameamaninuniform.Itwastheforester!(倒裝句)第21頁共21頁,⑤Slowly,sheturnedaround,and,musteringallherremainingstrength,staggeredtowardsthedarkness,herbackhunchedandbodyslightlytrembling.(獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu))⑥Sensinganoteofsincerityinmyvoice,he,afteramomentaryhesitation,noddedandwalkedtohisfavoritecake.“MayIhavethisone?”heenquiredsheepishly.(非謂語動詞)⑦Withhisheaddrooping,Johnreluctantlyturnedaround,andslowlyinchedhiswaytohisroom.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))⑧Eyeslingeringonthefigurine,theman’sfacesoftened,and,muchtotheboy’sastonishment,itcreasedintoafaintsmile.(介詞短語)⑨Whenledoutoftheforest,SteveandIrepeatedlystammeredourheartfeltthankstohim.(狀語從句省略)讀后續(xù)寫高頻語法形容詞做狀語表原因_________________________(又沮喪又無助),Ericburstintotears.______________________________________________(很想知道里面在發(fā)生什么)，Ericpushedthedooropenandslippedintothehouse.[Depressedandhelpless][Curioustoknowwhatwashappeninginside]表結(jié)果Ericfinallymadeittothetoppfthemountain,_________________________(饑餓但卻興奮).Ericwasencouragedbytheteacher’ssmile,______________________________(對計劃充滿了信心).[hungrybutexcited][fullofconfidenceinhisplan]表伴隨_________________________(沉思),Marysatstillagainstthedoor._________________________(迷失在森林中),Marylayunderatree,______________________________(充滿恐懼和絕望)。[Deepinthough][Lostintheforest;fulloffearanddespair]高頻語法訓(xùn)練(一)1.回答不出老師的問題，學(xué)生們都保持沉默。Unabletoanswertheteacher’squestion,allthestudentskeptsilent.2.在我回家的途中，我看到一個中年男子躺在路邊，爛碎如泥。Onmywayhome,Isawamiddle-agedmanlyingbytheroadside,deaddrunk.3.因為害怕挨罵，Eric起了逃學(xué)的念頭。Afraidofbeingscolded,Ericthoughtofplayingtruant.4.他躺在床上，睡不著，聽著外面呼嘯的風(fēng)聲。Hewaslyinginbed,awake,listeningtotheroaringwind.5.Mary滿臉通紅，氣喘吁吁地從大門口跑了進來。Flushedandbreathless,Maryboundedinthroughthegate.6.Jack在他房間里來回踱步，陷入了沉思。Jackpacedupanddowninhisroom,deepinthought.7.在直升飛機的幫助下，Mary安然無恙地出了森林，見到了她的丈夫。Withthehelpofthehelicopter,Marygotoutoftheforestandsawherhusband,safeandsound.8.困在迷霧中，我什么也做不了，只能哭泣，無助又失落。第21頁共21頁,Trappedinthedensemist,Icoulddonothingbutburstintotears,helplessanddisappointed.9.他們同意再也不吵架了，決心要過上最充實的生活。Theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determinedtolivethelifetothefullest.10.我轉(zhuǎn)過身來面對她，準(zhǔn)備好了讓她看到我眼中的憤怒和失望。Iturnedoverandfacedher,readytoletherseetheangeranddisappointmentinmyeyes.11.Lucy道歉說：“對不起。”滿臉羞愧和自責(zé)。“Sorry,”apologizedLucy,shame-facedandself-condemned.12.又絕望又疲憊，Jane跪了下來，眼淚順著她的臉頰流了下來。Desperateandexhausted,Janekneltdown,withtearsrollingdownhercheeks.13.Lucy猶豫了，不知道怎樣回答才能既誠實又婉轉(zhuǎn)。Lucyhesitated,uncertainofhowtocombinehonestyanddiplomacyinheranswer.14.他們一言不發(fā)地聽著，都知道安慰她只會讓她更生氣。Theylistenedinsilence,awarethatanyattempttocalmherwouldonlyincreaseherannoyance.15.Harry很好奇，想知道商店里的人群在看什么，于是便擠了進去。Curioustoknowwhatthecrowdintheshopwasstaringat,Harryedgedhiswayinsideandsqueezedin.通過介詞結(jié)構(gòu)：with;without,atthesightof,upon(1)Hewalkedawaywithoutabackwardglance.(2)Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorwithmypalmssweating.(3)Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.(4)Onthatdarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashingandthewindswerehowlingwith復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)with+賓語(名詞/代詞)+賓語補足語(不定式、分詞、形容詞、副詞、介詞短語、名詞)______________________________(淚水流下她的臉龐),wordsfailedher.Shefellasleep______________________________(燈亮著)。______________________________(東西買齊),theyheadedforthechurch.[Withtearsstreamingdownherface][withthelightburning][Withallthethingsbought]高頻語法訓(xùn)練(二)1.女孩微笑著，長發(fā)在微風(fēng)中飄動。Thegirlsmiledwithherlonghairflowinginthebreeze.2.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水。Hiswifewasindeepsorrowwithhereyesfilledwithtears.3.天亮?xí)rJane醒了，覺得頭暈暈的。ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeupwithherheadspinning.4.意外毀了他的計劃，他憤怒地大叫了一聲。Withhisplanruinedbytheaccident,heletoutacryofanger.第21頁共21頁,借助非謂語做狀語：doing;done;havingdone(1)表先后：havingdone(在...之后；已經(jīng)...了)__________________________________________(已經(jīng)走了很長一段時間了),shefoundherlost.______________________________(已經(jīng)失敗三次了),hedidn’twanttotryagain.[havingwalkedforquitealongtime][Havingfailedthreetimes](2)doing/done表原因(大多放主句前)：Treatedsounfairly,shehowledinpainandanger.________________________________(認出了這位顧客是誰),themanagerwasmostapologeticandreprimandedtheassistantseverely.______________________________(看到了我的所作所為),mymotherfrownedasiftoaskmetostandupquickly.______________________________(被老師責(zé)罵),heburstintotears.[Recognizingwhothecustomerwas][SeeingwhatIdid][Scoldedbytheteacher]表結(jié)果(大多放主句后)：Hisfatherdied,______________________________(給他留下了一大筆錢)。Everythingaroundhimwasfullofherpresence,_____________________(不斷重揭傷疤).[leavinghimalotofmoney][continuallyreopeningthewound]表伴隨(主句前后都可)：Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.Ayoungmancametothepolicestation,__________________________________________(被一群記者圍著).______________________________(忽略了她的話),themanwalkedawayquickly.[surroundedbyagroupofjournalists][Ignoringherwords]高頻語法訓(xùn)練(三)1.在家復(fù)習(xí)了整整一個周末，他滿懷信心地期待即將到來的考試。Havingreviewedhislessonsforawholeweekendathome,heexpectedthecomingexamwithconfidence.2.她接連經(jīng)歷了那么多次失敗后，終于振作起來了。Havingexperiencedsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.3.在銀行排隊等了一個小時后，這個女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.4.她在街上漫無目的地逛了好幾個小時，感到有點餓，想吃點東西。Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.第21頁共21頁,5.向鄰居們打了招呼后，我們開始搭起嶄新的帳篷。Havinggreetedourneighbors,webegantosetupourbrand-newtent.6.說出真相后，他心里輕松了很多，心情放松地回家了。Havingtoldthetruth,hefelteasierinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.7.做好充分的準(zhǔn)備后，她站在窗邊，期待著女兒的到來。Havingmadefullpreparations,shestoodbythewindow,expectingthearrivalofherdaughter.8.為了給裁判留下好印象，我花了很大力氣，因此當(dāng)知道自己沒有贏的時候我們失望。Havingmadeahugeefforttoimpressthejudges,IwasratherdisappointedonknowingthatIdidn'twin.9.得到了我會在家里好好照顧母親的承諾后，爸爸放心地把行李放進了他的后備箱。Havinggottenmypromiseoftakinggoodcareofmymotherathome,myfatherrestedassuredandputhisluggageintothetrunkofhiscar.10.因為承諾了五點之前我們一定到那兒，所以擋車拋錨的時候，我非常慌張。Havingpromisedthatwewouldgettherebeforefive,Iwasseizedwithpanicwhenthecarbrokedown.11.我小心翼翼地打開信，希望能找到一些有關(guān)錢包主人身份的線索。Iopenedthelettercarefully,hopingforsomecluetotheidentityoftheownerofthewallet.12.他又沮喪又低落，低著頭，走在隊伍的最后。Depressedandlow-spirited,hewalkedattheendofthelinewithhisheaddrooping.13.他聚精會神地聽著，咬著嘴唇，眼睛盯著地板。Helistenedwithcloseattention,bitinghislipsandstaringatthefloor.14.“當(dāng)然有圣誕老人啊”，奶奶說到，一邊用手指撥弄著我的頭發(fā)。“Ofcourse,thereisaSantaClause."Grandmasaid,strokingherfingersthroughmyhair.15.她感動累極了，坐在溪邊，讓疼痛的雙腳放松一下。Shefeltexhaustedandsatbythestream,restingherachingfeet.16.她穿著圣誕老人的服裝，悄悄溜進房間，沒有被看到。DressedinaSantaClauscostume,sheslippedintotheroomwithoutbeingnoticed.17.Jane覺得冷得無法忍受，精疲力竭，完全不知道該如何應(yīng)對這種可怕的情況。Feelingunbearablycoldandextremelyexhausted,Janewasquiteatalossastohowtocopewiththeterriblesituation.18.Ronny沉浸在強烈的恐懼感中，一句話也說不出來。Immersedinastrongsenseofscare,Ronnycouldn'tutterasingleword.19.他屏住呼吸，盡力不發(fā)出任何聲音，免得讓人知道他來了。Heheldhisbreath,tryingtonotmaketheslightestsoundthatmightbetrayhispresence.20.好奇心切，她從河岸邊跑開，穿過田野去追兔子。Burningwithcuriosity,sheranawayfromtheriverbankandacrossthefieldtochaseaftertherabbit.21.他痛苦地喘著氣，強迫自己站了起來，邁著緩慢的步子，搖搖晃晃地開始走。Gaspingwithpain,heforcedhimselftohisfeetandwithslow,shakysteps,begantowalk.獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)：(1)Tearsfillinghereyes(眼里滿是淚水),sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.(2)Herhandsshaking(她的手揮舞著),shewasonthevergeoftears.第21頁共21頁,(3)Hesmiled,hiseyesfulloflaughter(眼里帶著笑意).倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)1.完全倒裝①以副詞there,here,away,down,off,in,out等副詞或者intheroom,onthewall等介詞短語為首時，后面的主語為名詞時，需要用全倒裝；主語若為人稱代詞，則不用倒裝。ThedooropenedandincameMr.Wang.Infrontoftheschoolstandsthehospital.倒裝句改裝練習(xí)(一)1.柜臺后面是一位老太太，她幫我找到了我祖父的唱片。正常：Anoldwomanwasbehindthecounter,whohelpedmefindmygrandfather’srecords.倒裝：Behindthecounterwasanoldwoman,whohelpedmefindmygrandfather’srecords.2.現(xiàn)在輪到你做一個簡短的演講了。正常：Yourturntomakeashortspeechcomesnow.倒裝：Nowcomesyourturntomakeashortspeech.3.山頂上坐著一個巨人。正常：Agiantmansatonthetopofthemountain.倒裝：Onthetopofthemountainsatagiantman.4.從黑暗中傳來一個她從未聽到過的聲音。正常：Avoicesheneverheardbeforecameoutofthedarkness.倒裝：Outofthedarknesscameavoicesheneverheardbefore.5.在前門站著她的丈夫湯姆.當(dāng)她無處可尋時他非常焦慮。正常：Herhusband,Tom,whosufferedgreatanxietywhenshewasnowheretofind.,stoodatthefrontdoor.倒裝：Atthefrontdoorstoodherhusband,Tom,whosufferedgreatanxietywhenshewasnowheretofind.6.一顆閃閃發(fā)光的白珍珠掉進了他的手指里正常：Ashinywhitepearlintohisfingersfell.倒裝：Intohisfingersfellashinywhitepearl.2.部分倒裝①在so/such…that…結(jié)構(gòu)中，當(dāng)so/such…位于句首時，后面的從句需要考慮使用倒裝。②“only+狀語”置于句首時，句子需要使用部分倒裝。③否定詞none,neither,nor,never,hardly,scarcely,barely,little,seldom等或atnotime,innoway,undernocircumstances,bynomeans,notuntil,notonly,notasingleword等表示否定意義的短語放于句首時，句子也要部分倒裝。Ønotonly……butalsoNotonlydidhemakeapromise,butalsohekeptit.他不僅許下了諾言，而且遵守了諾言。ØNosooner…..than.../Hardly....when...一…..就...HardlyhadTomgotoffwhenhedashedtohisbelovedwife.湯姆一下車就沖向他心愛的妻子。Ønot…..until第21頁共21頁,Notuntilherhusbandcamedidshegetanyhelp.直到他老公沖過來，她才有的救ØneverNeverwillIleaveyouagain!我再也不會離開你了！ØlittleLittledidIknowthatthistripwasgoingtobeaspecialone.我不知道這次旅行會是一次特別的旅行。ØinnotimeInnotimedidanabsolutedarknessruletheforest.頃刻間，黑暗統(tǒng)治了森林。Øinnoway“InnowaywillIgobacktothathell-likeplace.Neverwillanythingtodowithherdisturbmeanymore.”heroaredinhisheartlikealion.他在心里怒吼著：“我絕不回到那個鬼地方。我要忘卻一切和她有關(guān)的人與事。”Ø虛擬語氣條件句中的“ifIwere/had/should....”改為“Were/Should/HadI…”Lookingback,IfeelIwouldn’tbeabletorideabikehadIlostheart.回首往事，我覺得如果我失去了信心，我就不能騎自行車了。④as表示盡管時，后面的形容詞、名詞、副詞等成分必須置前；though在這種情況下，是否倒裝都可以。例句1：盡管他在家，他仍繼續(xù)干農(nóng)活。正常：Though/Although/Whilehewas,hestillwentonwithhisfarmwork.倒裝：Exhaustedas/thoughhewas,hestillwentonwithhisfarmwork.例句3：雖然她心不在焉，健忘，但她總是讓我們知道她有多愛我們。正常：Though/Although/Whilesheisabsent-mindedandforgetful,sheneverfailstoletusknowhowmuchshelovesus.倒裝：Absent-mindedandforgetfulassheis,sheneverfailstoletusknowhowmuchshelovesus.⑤such位于句前做表語________________________(這就是我們的家)inthefuture.________________________thatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.這就是有志者事竟成這個真理。_________________________—alittlebitmoreeffortsandalittlebitmoredeterminationwillcreatealittlebitmoremiracle.這就是成功的秘訣，多一點努力，多一點決心，你就能創(chuàng)造出多一點的奇跡。[Suchisourhome][Suchisthetruth][Suchisthekeytosuccess]倒裝句改裝練習(xí)(二)1.我們?nèi)绱丝释A得這場比賽，所以我們應(yīng)該做好準(zhǔn)備。正常：Wearesoeagertowinthegamethatweshouldprepareforit.倒裝：Soeagertowinthegamearewethatweshouldprepareforit.2.他開車太不小心，差點死掉。正常：Hedrovesocarelesslythathealmostkilledhimself.倒裝：Socarelesslydidhedrivethathealmostkilledhimself.3.天太黑了，他看不見同伴的臉。正常：Itwassodarkthathecouldn’tseethefacesofhiscompanions.倒裝：Sodarkwasitthathecouldn’tseethefacesofhiscompanions.4.簡激動得忍不住哭了起來。正常：Janewassoexcitedthatshecouldn’thelpweeping.第21頁共21頁,倒裝：SoexcitedwasJanethatshecouldn’thelpweeping.5.考試時，我緊張得頭腦一片空白。正常：Duringtheexam,Iwassonervousthatmymindwentblank.倒裝：Duringtheexam,sonervouswasIthatmymindwentblank.6.他非常絕望借酒澆愁。正常：Hewassodesperatethathedrownedhissadnessintowine.倒裝：Sodesperatewashethathedrownedhissadnessintowine.7.她是如此羞愧以至于臉如充血般發(fā)燙。正常：Shewassoashamedthatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.倒裝：Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.8.當(dāng)簡只是在這種無助的情況下，她意識到她深愛的湯姆對她意義重大。正常：WhenJanewasonlyinsuchhelplesssituation,shewasawarethatherbelovedTommeantsomuchtoher.倒裝：OnlywhenJanewasinsuchhelplesssituationwassheawarethatherbelovedTommeantsomuchtoher.9.他們意識到，只有經(jīng)過這段生命冒險的旅程，他們之間珍貴的愛才能戰(zhàn)勝生活中的每一個困難正常：Theyrealizedthepreciouslovebetweenthemcouldconquereverydifficultyinlifeonlyafterthislife-riskingjourney倒裝：Onlyafterthislife-riskingjourneydidtheyrealizethepreciouslovebetweenthemcouldconquereverydifficultyinlife.10.在那一刻,我相信施密特先生和我爺爺是對的：決不能偽造獎項，也不能購買.正常：IbelievedthatMr.Schmidtandmygrandpawereright:nevercanawardsbefalsifiedorboughtonlyatthatmoment倒裝：OnlyatthatmomentdidIbelievethatMr.Schmidtandmygrandpawereright:nevercanawardsbefalsifiedorbought.11.簡不僅精疲力盡，饑腸轆轆，而且對自己的無理行為深感遺憾。正常：Janewasnotonlyexhaustedandhungry,butshewasalsodeeplyregretfulforherunreasonablebehaviors.倒裝：NotonlywasJaneexhaustedandhungry,butshewasalsodeeplyregretfulforherunreasonablebehaviors.12.簡剛看到這些漿果就意識到她有多餓。正常:Janehadnosooner/hardlyseentheseberriesthan/whensherealizedhowstarvingshewas.倒裝:Nosooner/HardlyhadJaneseentheseberriesthan/whensherealizedhowstarvingshewas.13.簡一生中從來沒有這樣后悔過。正常：ShehadneverbeforeinJane’slifebeensoovercomebyregret.倒裝：NeverbeforeinJane’slifehadshebeensoovercomebyregret.14.多拉從來沒有收到過這樣的禮物正常：Shehadneverinherlifetastedanythingbetter.倒裝：Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.15.獎勵絕不能偽造或購買。正常：Awardscanneverbefalsifiedorbought.倒裝：Nevercanawardsbefalsifiedorbought.16.簡沖向巖石，很快就爬了上去。正常：Janerushedtotherockandclimbontoitinnotime.倒裝：InnotimedidJanerushtotherockandclimbontoit.第21頁共21頁,17.如果我年輕兩歲，我會做點什么。正常：IfIweretwoyearsyounger,Iwoulddosomething.倒裝：WereItwoyearsyounger,Iwoulddosomething.18.她雖然筋疲力盡了，但還是不停地大喊大叫。正常：Though/Although/Whileshewasexhausted,shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.倒裝：Exhaustedas/thoughshewas,shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.19.盡管他感到筋疲力盡，疲憊不堪，但他仍然堅持這個計劃。正常：Though/Although/Whilehefeltexhaustedandtired,hestillstucktotheplan.倒裝：Exhaustedandtiredashefelt,hestillstucktotheplan.虛擬語氣第21頁共21頁,句型升級應(yīng)用實例句型1wishing...希望...1.Hesatthere,wishinghehadstayedathomethen.(與過去事實相反：haddone)2.Heturnedoverthephotoalbum,wishingthathehadjoinedthepartylastnight.句型2Givenonemorechance,Iwould...如果再有一次機會，我會...1.Givenonemorechance,Iwouldn’tletmyparentsdown.2.Givenonemorechance,Iwoulddefinitelymakeitbetter.高頻語法訓(xùn)練(四)1.如果我多等一分鐘，我就坐上汽車了。IfIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtthebus.2.如果我們中有更多人看重家庭而不是金錢，這個世界就會更美好。Ifmoreofusvaluedfamilyabovemoney,itwouldbeabetterworld.3.如果沒有挫折，我們的人生就不會充滿精彩的故事。Withoutsetbacks,ourlifewouldnotbefilledwithwonderfulstories.4.他無法想象如果Henry不來救他，會發(fā)生什么。Hecouldn'timaginewhatwouldhavehappenedifHenryhadn'tcometohisrescue.5.要不是MrRowe的耐心和鼓勵，Steve是無法最終實現(xiàn)他的夢想的。HaditnotbeenforMr.Rowe'spatienceandencouragement,Stevewouldn'thaveachievedhisdream第21頁共21頁,atlast.6.如果媽媽沒有那么健忘的話，我們就不用再回去取東西了。Hadmomnotbeenthatforgetful,itwouldhavesavedusthetroubleofgoingbackagaintofetchthings.7.Steven尷尬地低下頭，真希望剛才沒有口誤。Stevenloweredhisheadwithembarrassment,wishinghehadn'tmadethatslipoftongue.8.要不是這次經(jīng)歷，我就不會意識到我應(yīng)該花更多的時間和家人在一起。Butforthisexperience,Iwouldn'thaverealizedthatIshouldspendmoretimewithmyfamily.9.再給我一次機會的話，我不會再以外貌來判斷一個人。Givenonemorechance,Iwouldn'thavejudgedapersonbyhisappearance.10.“要是我當(dāng)初聽取了媽媽的建議該多好！”小女孩低聲對自己說。“IfonlyIhadlistenedtomymother'sadvice!"thelittlegirlwhisperedtoherself.11.要是沒有Eric當(dāng)時的鼓勵，我可能接下來的一天都仍然沉浸在悲傷的情緒里WithoutEric'sencouragement,Iwouldhavebeenimmersedinsorrowfortherestoftheday.12.如果沒有這些錢，這個人可能會一整晚埃餓，失去對生活的希望。Withoutthismoney,themanmighthavestarvedthewholenightandlosthopeforlife.13.如果再給我一次機會，我會毫不猶豫地與他分享我的食物。Givenonemorechance,Iwouldsharewithhimmyfoodwithouthesitation.14.如果我沒有和Tom砂架，就不會被困在這個可怕的地方，面臨死亡的危險。Hadn'tIquarreledwithTom,Iwouldn'tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdeath.15.伙伴們都在到處跑著，玩得很開心，可Susan卻獨自坐在草坪上，希望自己此刻在家里。Hercompanionswererunningaboutenjoyingthemselves,butSusansataloneonthegrass,wishingshewereathomethismoment.名詞性從句讀后續(xù)寫中常用到的兩類名詞性從句是：it做形式主語的主語從句以及同位語從句①主語從句It做形式主語，真正的主語在that后1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtohimthatthefamilyinsidewasindanger.2.IthitmeallofasuddenthatIhadforgottenherbirthday.②同位語從句對前面的抽象名詞進行解釋說明1.Thefactthatshedidn'tlikemereallyhurtme.2.Theywereshockedatthenewsthattheirhometownhadbeenflooded高頻語法訓(xùn)練(五)1.我突然想到她可能是在撒謊Athoughtsuddenlyoccurredtomethatshemightbelying.2.Harry完全不知道他們在說什么。Harrydoesn'thavetheslightestideawhattheyaretalkingabout.3.我從未想到我們學(xué)校的籃球隊會在決賽中敗北。Itneveroccurredtomethatthebasketballteamofmyschoolwouldbedefeatedinthefinal.4.他們應(yīng)該再次嘗試的想法值得考慮。Theideathattheyshouldtryasecondtimeisworthconsidering.5.我們一起來討論這個話題的主意真是讓我松了一口氣。Theideathatwediscussthetopictogetherisreallyarelieftome.6.我突然意識到，與另一支隊伍比賽是一個很好的學(xué)習(xí)機會。Itstruckmeallofasuddenthatplayingagainsttheotherteamisagreatlearningopportunity.7.盡管訓(xùn)練生活很辛苦、但我珍惜每一個幸福時刻。第21頁共21頁,Ienjoyeveryhappymomentdespitethefactthattraininglifeisreallydifficult.8.他競賽獲得一等獎的消息傳來，我們又高興又激動。Wordcamethathehadwonthefirstprizeinthecompetition,makingusdelightedandexcited.9.她突然想到她媽媽到現(xiàn)在還完全不知道發(fā)生了什么事。Itoccurredtoherthathermotherwasstillignorantofwhathadhappened.10.一想到她的努力可能會付之東流，她就悲痛難忍。Sheisseizedwithsorrowatthethoughtthathereffortsmightbeinvain.11.我突然意識到，金錢無法彌補過去五年里他所遭受的苦難。Itsuddenlydawnedonmethatmoneycouldn'tmakeupforwhathehadsufferedinthepastfiveyears.12.想到我們可能在這樣的黑暗中迷了路，我嚇得渾身發(fā)抖。Thethoughtthatwemighthavegotlostinsuchdarknesssentshiversdownmyspine.13.Jack腦海里涌起一個可怕的想法，這個人可能會為了偷房子里的貴重物品而TheawfulthoughtcrowdedinJack'smindthatthemancouldprobablydoharmtothefamilyinordertostealpreciousbelongingsinthehouse.14.Jack突然想到一個主意，他可以扔一些石頭到房子里，把這家人吵醒。AnideaflashedintoJack'smindthathecouldwakethefamilybythrowingsomestonesintothehouse.15.我接受了父親的建議，要成為一名醫(yī)生，雖然我對這樣的前途毫無把握。Iacceptedmyfather'ssuggestionthatIshouldbecomeadoctor,thoughtheprospectI'mnotsureatall.第21頁共21頁,技巧四：無靈主語改裝法無靈主語的概念極為簡單：用無生命的事物做主語來展開句子。其實，這種句式結(jié)構(gòu)它向我們傳達的只是一種思維模式，即一種思考的方式而已。例子：I love everybody.我愛大家。如果出現(xiàn)在口語中，這樣的表達當(dāng)然最為清晰但如果出現(xiàn)在寫作中，下面的表達可能更為生動一些：My love goes to everybody.從例子可以看出，用客觀的事物love代替有生命的I，這就是無靈主語的實質(zhì)。 我們用下面的公式來表達，就是：無靈主語句=無靈主語+有靈動詞“無靈主語”簡單理解就是“沒有生命力”的東西做主語。比如時間，地點，自然現(xiàn)象等。“有靈動詞”簡單理解就是把沒有生命力的東西，賦予有生命力的動作。比如上一句My love goes to everybody.中l(wèi)ove就是沒有生命力的名詞，但是go就是有生命力的動詞。¢使用無靈主語的優(yōu)點 優(yōu)點1往往在寫作時，我們會反復(fù)用同一有生命的詞作主語，使語句顯得單調(diào)，重復(fù)。例1We don’t think so.If we want light,we must conquer darkness. 我們并不這么認為。如果我們想要光明，我們就必須征服黑暗?！救齻€we的使用，使句子顯得平淡，甚至別扭】改為無靈主語后：We don’t think so.If we want light,darkness must be conquered. 我們并不這么認為。如果我們想要光明，黑暗就必須被征服。優(yōu)點2將無生命的事物作主語而展開的句子，往往會用上比喻、擬人等修辭手法，語言隨之提升一個檔次。 這也就是無靈主語的難點所在，也是華麗之處。需要注意的是，并不是簡單的主動語態(tài)變?yōu)楸粍诱Z態(tài)，而是用主動語態(tài)去表達被動意義。 例2Iforgothisname.我們忘了他的名字了?！静⒉皇呛唵蔚刈?yōu)楸粍?，而?yīng)當(dāng)更為形象的用主動語態(tài)表示?！扛臑闊o靈主語后：“他的名字溜出了我的大腦。”Hisnameslippedmymind.“他的名字沒有在我頭腦中扎根。”Hisnamedidn'ttakerootinmymind.例3Hewassonervous.他很緊張。改為無靈主語后：Awaveofnervousnesswashedoverhim.一陣緊張的情緒席卷了他。例4Hewasexcited.他很興奮。改為無靈主語后：Excitementseizedhim.興奮（這種情緒）抓住了他。優(yōu)點3主語是有生命的事物時，展開的句子往往帶有該有生命物質(zhì)的主觀感情色彩，而如果是無靈主語，則表達很客觀。 例5比如：“我們從生活中學(xué)到......   ”改為無靈主語后：可以表述為“生活告訴我們......” 也就是：  Life has told us that... 比如: “海外華人時刻關(guān)注祖國。 ”   第21頁共21頁,改為無靈主語后：可以表述為“祖國時刻牽動著海外華人的心”Motherland,always,is drawing the heart of overseas Chinese. ¢無靈主語的應(yīng)用五大類：第一類：主語是表示情感狀態(tài)的抽象名詞這類名詞有fear恐懼，excitement興奮等。與之對應(yīng)的動詞有：seize(侵襲，突然控制）,choke(使哽咽)，flood(使大受感動，充滿），creep（不知不覺地產(chǎn)生）,grip(緊抓），givewayto(被…代替）等詞。請看下面的例句：（1）Panicseizedher.她突然驚慌失措。（2）Despairchokedherwords.她絕望得說不出話來。（3）Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverhim.他深感寬慰。第二類：主語是表示時間和地點的名詞這類名詞有：thetown（鎮(zhèn)），thefollowingyear（第二年）等。與之對應(yīng)的動詞有：witness(見證）,find,see,boast（有引以為榮的事物）等。請看下面的例句：（1）Beijinghaswitnessedgreatchangesinrecentyears.北京見證了最近幾年的的巨大變化。（2）Thefollowingyearsawthedeathofhismother.第二年他的媽媽去世了。（3）Thetownboastsabeautifullake.這個鎮(zhèn)引以為榮的是有個美麗的湖。第三類：主語是表示自然現(xiàn)象等名詞這類名詞有：fog霧、earthquake地震等。與之對應(yīng)的動詞有：blanket（覆蓋）,come,bring,prevent,strike,hit,threaten等詞。請看下面的例句：（1）Thethickfogblanketedthefield.濃霧籠罩著整個大地。（2）Anearthquakecamelikeathiefinthenight，withoutwarning.地震到來，猶如夜賊，不作預(yù)告。（3）Therainpreventedtouristsfromenjoyingthefullmoon.雨使得游客無法欣賞到滿月。第四類：主語是表示身體部位和音容等名詞這類名詞有：face臉,laughter笑聲等與之對應(yīng)的動詞有：lightup(照亮),brighten(照亮),linger(繼續(xù)存留),wellup(涌出),flash等詞。請看下面的例句：（1）Herface litup/brightenedwhenIgaveherthepresent.我給她禮物時，她的臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩。（2）Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里縈繞。（3）Whenhesawthefamiliarhandwriting,tearswelledupinhiseyes.他一看到熟悉的字跡，便熱淚盈眶。第五類：主語是表示行為和動作的名詞常見的表示行為或動作的名詞有如sight,thought,glance,look,idea,feeling等。與之對應(yīng)的動詞有：strike(打),arouse(喚起),remind,delight,frighten,overwhelm(壓倒）等詞。請看下面的例句：（1）Aterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckme.我突然想到一個可怕的想法。（2）Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.想到這個情景我心中充滿了恐懼。第21頁共21頁,翻譯練習(xí)（第一組）1.他驚恐地瞪大了眼睛。2.她笑了，眼里閃爍著興奮的光芒。3.她的眼里充滿淚水。4.那條狗饑餓的目光落在我的三明治。fallon/landon...(目光)落在……5.她直視父親的眼睛，誠實地回答了他的問題。6.他似乎不愿意與我的目光接觸。7.她試圖坐起來，目光緊盯著瓊的臉。8.他一刻不停地盯著我。9.他進屋時眼睛掃視了整個房間。10.他回答時垂下眼睛看著膝蓋。（第二組）1.巴黎的服裝廣告使他大開眼界。2.這真使我開眼界。3.電視真使人大開眼界。4.旅游使他大開眼界。5.這讓我大開眼界。6.聽到這個消息，他絕望地把悲傷淹沒在酒里。7.別讓小狗離開你的視線。8.女孩目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地看著她美麗的新娃娃。9.他凝視這窗外的雪。10.那男人粗暴地沖她大聲喊叫，她也怒目而視。11.閉上眼睛，不許偷看！12.觀眾們張大了嘴巴呆呆地看著魔術(shù)師的表演。13.她在考場上偷看教科書。14.亨利從窗戶向廚房里窺視。15.我瞥見窗前有個身影。16.埃米莉回頭看了一眼。17.他兇巴巴地環(huán)視房間，像是等待有人來挑戰(zhàn)他。18.塔瑪拉搖著頭不相信地盯著他看。19.帕特里克坐著，茫然地看著前方。20.他羞澀地瞥了她一眼。 第21頁共21頁,參考答案：（第一組）1.Hiseyeswerewidewithhorror.2.Shelaughed,hereyesshiningwithexcitement.3.Hereyesfilledwithtears.4.Thedog’shungryeyesfellonmysandwich.5.Shelookedatherfatherstraightintheeyeandansweredhisquestiontruthfully.6.Heseemedunwillingtomeetmyeyes.7.Shetriedtositup,hereyesfixedonJean’sface.8.Hiseyesneverleftmine.9.Hiseyesscannedtheroomasheentered.10.Hiseyesdroppedtoherlapassheanswered.（第二組）1.TheadvertisementsofcostumeinParis2.Whataneye-openerit’sbeenforme!3.Televisionisarealeye-opener.4.Travelhasgreatlybroadenedhishorizons.5.Thishasreallyopenedmyeyes.6.Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.7.Don’tletthepuppyrunoutofyoursight.8.Thegirlgazedatherbeautifulnewdoll.9.Hegazedoutthewindowatthesnow.10.Thewomanglaredatthemanafterheyelledather.11.Closeyoureyes,andnopeeking!12.Theaudiencesgapedatthe Magician’s performance.13.Shepeepedathertextbookduringtheexamination.14.Henrypeepedthroughthewindowintothekitchen. 15.Iglimpsedafigureatthewindow. 16.Emilyglancedoverhershoulder. 17.Heglaredroundtheroomasifexpectingachallenge. 18.Tamarastaredathimindisbelief,shakingherhead. 19.Patricksat gazingintospace.    20.Heglancedshylyather.第21頁共21頁,技巧五：使用修辭手法修辭手法其實已經(jīng)融合在前面的幾個技巧中，為了更明白，所以再單獨解釋幾張常見的修辭手法(1)明喻(simile)明喻是比喻修辭的一種，在強調(diào)兩種事物的相似點的同時，本體、喻體、喻詞都出現(xiàn)，且能使語言生動形象。喻詞有l(wèi)ike,as,as...as,asif,of,comparedto,besimilarto,what等。like1.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.（情感描寫）她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。2.IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.（情感描寫）我感覺自己像漂浮在悲傷的海洋中。3.Thesceneryalongthejourneyisjustlikeabreath-takinglandscapepainting.(景物描寫)沿路的風(fēng)景就像一幅美麗的山水畫卷。4.Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.(景物描寫)寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，像鋒利的小刀一樣刺痛了我的臉。5.Clustersofstarsdecoratedthevastskylikesparklingjewels.(景物描寫)繁星像珊珊發(fā)光的珠寶一樣裝飾了浩瀚的天空。as...as1.Thesmileonherfacewasasvibrantasthesunonasummerday.（情感描寫）她臉上的笑容和夏天的太陽一樣充滿活力。2.Fatherrushedtohisson'sschool,onlytodiscoverthebuildingwasasflataspancake(煎餅).(景物描寫)父親沖到兒子的學(xué)校后，才發(fā)現(xiàn)這座建筑已經(jīng)變成一片廢墟。3.Ireachedouttotouchherface,whichwasascoldastheice.(人物描寫)我伸手去摸她的臉，發(fā)現(xiàn)她的臉像冰一樣冰冷。更多搭配：asbusyasabee忙忙碌碌ashungryasawolf饑腸轆轆asproudasapeacock傲如孔雀aseasyasABC極其容易asbraveasalion勇猛如獅asprettyasapicture美如畫asif1.MrsSatherlookedatmyeyesasif(shewere)seeingmyinnerselflockedawayinside.（動作描寫）Sather老師看著我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我靈魂深處封閉的自我。2.Sheswepthersonintoherarmswithhereyeswetasifshewantedtosqueezethebreathoutofhim.（動作描寫）她眼睛濕潤，把兒子擁進懷里，仿佛想把他的呼吸擠出來。3.Herhairgrewgreyerandgreyer,asif(itwere)coveredwithsnowandfrost.（肖像描寫）他的頭發(fā)越來越白了，簡直像蓋了一頭皚皚的霜雪。4.Shefeltasifherhearthadbeenrippedfromherbody.（情感描寫）她感覺自己心好像從她的身體里被撕開了。(2)暗喻(metaphor)暗喻是比喻修辭的一種，用一種事物比喻另一種事物，本體喻體都出現(xiàn)，中間常用喻詞“是”等連接，有時不用喻詞。暗喻的典型形式為：甲是乙，而不用like,as等喻詞。be1.Herhairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownhershoulders.（肖像描寫）她的頭發(fā)像是一條流淌在她肩上的金色河流。2.Thebeautifulparkwasascentedcarpetofcolor.(景物描寫)美麗的公園就是一個芬芳的彩色地毯。3.Stopbeingsuchababy.(人物描寫)別這么幼稚好不好。4.Lifeisanunexploredriver.fulloftwistsandturns.(哲理)生活就像一條未被涉足的河流，有各種曲折。動詞連接第21頁共21頁,1.Ifeltalumpinmythroat,tearingwellingupinmyeyes.（情感描寫）我如鯁在喉，淚水濕潤了眼眶。2.Hedoesn'thaveanideaofhisown.Hejustparrotswhatotherpeoplesay.(人物描寫)他沒有自己的觀點，只會鸚鵡學(xué)舌。3.Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.（環(huán)境描寫）整個房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。4.Theboywolfeddownthefood.（動作描寫）小男孩狼吞虎咽。(3)擬人(personification)Personification與漢語擬人完全相同，就是賦予物以人的語言屬性。把自然現(xiàn)象當(dāng)作人來描寫1.Thewindstoodupandgaveashout.(景物描寫)大風(fēng)凜冽，發(fā)出怒吼。2.Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.(景物描寫)微風(fēng)輕柔地親吻著她的臉龐。3.Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.(景物描寫)鵝毛般的雪花在空中飛舞，像一幅美麗的圖畫。4.Themistswallowedhimup.(景物描寫)薄霧把他包圍起來。5.Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.(景物描寫)寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉。6.Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.(景物描寫)夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。7.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.(景物描寫)頃刻間，黑暗統(tǒng)治了森林。把含蓄抽象的概念當(dāng)作人來描寫1.Fearseized/swallowedhim.（情感描寫）恐懼把他吞噬了。2.Angerchokedmywords.（情感描寫）我氣得說不出話來。3.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.我突然想到一個好主意。4.Smiletookholdofhim.（情感描寫）他笑容滿面。5.Anxietytornhimintopieces.（情感描寫）她焦慮不安，十分崩潰。6.Courage/Confidencedesertedhim.（情感描寫）他沒信心了。7.Excitementdeprivedmeofallpowerofspeech.（情感描寫）我興奮的啥也說不出來了。把動物當(dāng)作人來描寫1.Inthedeadofnight,thecricketsplayedontheterraceofthehouse.(景物描寫)寂靜的夜，蟋蟀旁若無人地在房子的陽臺上玩。2.Birdsonthetreearesingingabeautifulsong.(景物描寫)樹上的小鳥在樹上唱著美妙的歌曲。3.Thefrogsaregivingaconcert---mixedchorus.(景物描寫)青蛙在舉辦音樂會---混聲大合唱。4.Firefliespatrolthegrasswithsmalllanterns(景物描寫)螢火蟲提著小燈籠在草叢中巡邏。(4)夸張(hyperbole)夸張是比喻修辭的一種，是以言過其實的說法表達強調(diào)的目的，它可以加強語拾勢，增加表達效果。使用數(shù)詞或量詞1.Myheartbrokeinaboutamillionpieces.（情感描寫）我的心成了碎片。2.Shewashalfdeadwithfear.（情感描寫）她嚇得半死。3.Thanksamillion.非常感謝你。4.I’vetoldyouamilliontimes.我都告訴你多少次了。5.Thebackpackweighsaton.背包很重。使用動詞1.Theyounggirlbroughtthehousedownwithherperformance.這位年輕姑娘的表演博得了滿堂喝彩。第21頁共21頁,2.Itmademejumpoutofmyskin.（情感描寫）嚇得我魂不附體。3.Ialmostlaughedmyheadoff.（情感描寫）我都快笑死了。4.Mybloodfroze.（情感描寫）我的血液都凝固了。5.Shecriedhereyesout.（情感描寫）她痛哭涕流。6.Itbroughtherheartintohermouth.（情感描寫）讓她的心懸到了嗓子眼。7.Myheartsankwhenheleft.（情感描寫）當(dāng)他離開時我心都碎了。使用形容詞和副詞在日常對話中，人們常用形容詞或者副詞去修飾微不足道的事情，目的就是為了渲染一種氣氛，強調(diào)某種意義的事情。如副詞：extremely；awfully；terribly；perfectly；horribly等等；形容詞：miserable;horrible;splendid等等1.It'sbeautiful,heavenlybeautiful.(景物描寫)那兒很漂亮，就像天堂那般漂亮。使用介詞短語1.Shewenthomeinafloodoftears.（情感描寫）她淚如泉涌地回家去了。類似表達：Sheshedfloodsoftears.(使用動詞)2.Whentheytoldthenews,Iwasoverthemoon/onthetopoftheworld.（情感描寫）當(dāng)他們告訴我這個消息時，我樂不可支。3.Hewasbentoutofshape.（情感描寫）他非常生氣（氣到變形）找出下列句子中的修辭手法1.Myverythoughtwasliketheghostlyrustleofdeadleaves.2.Helookedasifhehadjuststeppedoutofmybookoffairytales.3.Windandrainnowwhippedthehouse.4.Thechildrenwetfromadulttoadultlikebucketsinafirebrigade.5.Thewindsoundedlikearoarofatrainpassingby.6.Householdandmedicalsuppliesstreamedinbyplane,train,truckandcar.7.Yesterday,Iwenttothepark.Irodemybicyclethroughtheevergreentreeswhichwereastallasskyscrapers.Thesunshonethrougheclouds,whichwerefloatingpiecesofcottoncandyinthesky.Peoplewerelaughingandenjoyingthecompanyoftheirfamiliesandfriends.Irodepastagiantgardenofbeautifulpink,yellowandpurpleflowers:itwasascentedcarpetofcolor.Theparkislikeaoasisinthecity.8.Thewindwhispersinthetree.9.Thenoisewasloudenoughtowakethedead.10.Hisspeechbroughtthehousedown.11.TheoldVenicefellasleepagain.12.Thesunbrokethroughthecloudsandjumpedoutofthesea.13.Thebirdsdancedhappilyonthebranch.14.Sheeatslikeabird.15.Theloudmusicalmostdrovemeupawall.16.Thenightgentlylaysherhandatourfeverdheads.17.Thevolcanospitoutlavafromitsmouth.第21頁共21頁